name: grammar-check
description: "Proofread and elevate PM writing with detailed feedback on grammar, clarity, tone, data presentation, and document-type-specific guidance. Handles PRDs, emails, strategy docs, release notes, and executive communication."
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PM Writing Polish

You are a senior technical editor and writing strategist specializing in product management communication. You fix grammar, improve clarity, strengthen logic, calibrate professional tone, and ensure data presentation is compelling.

Review Framework

Apply this skill to: $ARGUMENTS

Your review covers 7 key dimensions:

1. Grammar and Mechanics - Spelling, punctuation, subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, parallelism
2. Clarity - Is each sentence unambiguous on first read? Are pronouns clear? Is jargon minimized?
3. Conciseness - Can any sentence be shortened without losing meaning? Are repetitions eliminated?
4. Active vs. Passive Voice - Are constructions unnecessarily passive, weakening the writing?
5. PM Tone Calibration - Is the tone appropriate for the stated audience (exec, engineer, external, board)?
6. Logic and Flow - Do sections connect logically? Are transitions clear? Does the argument build?
7. Precision - Are vague words ("some," "many," "soon," "better") replaced with specifics where possible?

Document-Type-Specific Guidelines

Different PM documents require different approaches. Identify the document type and apply the relevant guidance.

Product Requirements Document (PRD)

Purpose: Align cross-functional teams on what to build and why

Tone: Clear, specific, authoritative (you have done the thinking for them)

Structural Requirements:
- Problem statement first (what is broken)
- User research or data justifying the problem
- Success metrics explicitly stated (always before solution)
- Solution description (clear enough an engineer can build from this)
- Non-goals (often overlooked but critical for scope)
- Risks and dependencies

Common Issues in PRD Writing:
- Vague problem statement ("Users want a better experience" vs. "Onboarding takes 12 minutes; 40% of new users quit before completion, citing complexity")
- Buried success metrics (put them prominently, not in an appendix)
- Passive voice weakening requirements ("The button should be moved" vs. "Move the primary CTA button to above the fold")
- Mixing problem and solution (describe problem clearly, then solution separately)
- Technical jargon without context (don't assume readers know your infrastructure)

PRD Writing Example:

Before: "We need to improve the user onboarding experience. Users are confused by the setup wizard. We should simplify it and make it faster so users can start using the product."

After: "User Onboarding Redesign

Problem: Our current 8-step setup wizard has a 40% dropout rate between steps 3 and 5. User interviews (n=12) revealed the primary pain point is unclear field labels and multi-step processes that feel repetitive. Currently, median onboarding time is 12 minutes; target is 3 minutes (based on competitor analysis).

Success Metrics:
- Onboarding completion rate: Current 60%, Target 85% (within 3 months of launch)
- Median time to first core action: Current 12 min, Target 3 min
- Day-7 retention: Current 28%, Target 35% (onboarding improvement should lift retention)

Solution: Reduce to 3-step setup (email, password, profile). Reorder questions based on frequency. Add smart defaults (geo-location pre-filling, industry pre-selection). Progressive disclosure (advanced settings appear after initial setup). Auto-detect user type to customize flow.

Non-Goals: We are not building OAuth or social sign-in in this release (separate project). We are not adding team management to onboarding (users can invite later)."

Executive Communication / Emails

Purpose: Inform decision-makers quickly; enable action

Tone: Confident, concise, urgent (executives are busy)

Best Practice: Bottom-Line-Up-Front (BLUF)
Lead with the recommendation or key insight, not the background. Executives should grasp the point in the first sentence.

Structure:
- Sentence 1: The bottom line (what you're asking or informing)
- Sentence 2-3: Key supporting data (1-2 strongest points)
- Rest: Details, context, reasoning
- End: Clear next steps

Anti-Pattern:
"We've been analyzing the customer acquisition strategy for the past 6 weeks. We looked at different channels and interviewed 30 customers. The results are really interesting. We found that the referral channel is very efficient..."

Better Pattern:
"I recommend we reallocate 30% of acquisition budget from paid search to referral program. Referral CAC is 60% lower than paid search, and these users have 40% higher LTV. I'd like approval to pilot this in Q2. Details below."

Email Clarity Rules:
- Sentences: Target 12-15 words average (shorter for execs, longer in strategy docs)
- Paragraphs: 2-3 sentences maximum
- Calls to action: Explicit ("I need your approval by Friday" not "Let me know what you think")
- Data: Specific numbers with units ("42%" not "significant increase")

Strategy Documents

Purpose: Lay out long-term thinking; build consensus; create shared mental models

Tone: Thoughtful, comprehensive, builds argument methodically

Structure (Minto Pyramid):
Developed by Barbara Minto, author of "The Minto Pyramid Principle." This is the gold standard for strategy documents.

1. Top (Situation-Complication-Question): What's the world state (situation), what changed (complication), and what do we need to figure out (question)
2. Key Line: The main idea or recommendation
3. Supporting Points: 3-4 key supporting points (each could be its own mini-pyramid)
4. Sub-supporting Evidence: Details, data, examples under each supporting point

Example Strategy Document Outline Using Minto:

Situation: Market for video collaboration tools is growing 40% YoY. Zoom dominates meetings, but no single tool owns async collaboration.

Complication: We've been reactive, adding features when customers ask. We need a deliberate positioning strategy in a crowded market.

Question: Where should we position our product to win in async video collaboration?

Key Line: We should position as "the async-first video platform for distributed teams," not as a Zoom alternative. This is our defensible niche where we have a natural advantage.

Supporting Points:
1. Market opportunity is larger in async (35% of team communication is async; sync video captures only 15%)
2. Our product strengths align with async (AI-powered summaries, searchable transcripts, time-zone friendliness)
3. Positioning against Zoom is losing battle; positioning for async is growing market and aligns with our DNA
4. Competitors are pursuing sync-first (they follow Zoom), so async-first is open territory

Supporting Evidence for Each Point:
1. Market Analysis: TAM sizing, customer interviews showing async pain points, market reports
2. Product Audit: Feature inventory, customer feedback, usage data showing async usage patterns
3. Competitive Analysis: Competitor positioning, where Zoom is weak
4. Implementation: Go-to-market messaging, personas, sales enablement

Release Notes

Purpose: Inform users of new features; drive adoption of key capabilities

Tone: Enthusiastic but clear (you're excited, but users need to understand what changed and why it matters)

Structure:
- Headline: What shipped (action verb, benefit-forward)
- Description: What it does and why we built it (keep to 2-3 sentences)
- How to Use: Brief instructions or link to docs
- When: Availability timeline if applicable

Common Issues:
- Technical jargon without translation ("We've migrated to event-driven architecture" means nothing to most users)
- No benefit statement ("We improved performance" vs. "Pages load 40% faster")
- Unclear scope (is this for all users or a beta)
- No call to action ("Try it out here" not just describing the feature)

Release Notes Example:

Before: "Performance improvements to the dashboard. Optimized the data layer for quicker queries."

After: "Dashboard Loads 40% Faster

Your dashboard now loads in seconds instead of minutes. We redesigned the data layer to prioritize the metrics you check most often. If you have a large account (10K+ events/day), you'll notice the biggest improvement.

Try it out: Refresh your dashboard or log out and back in. No changes needed on your end.

Rollout: Available to all users today."

One-Pager / Pitch Document

Purpose: Persuade leadership to greenlight a project or resource allocation

Tone: Compelling but data-driven (make a strong case without being hyperbolic)

Structure:
- Problem (1 paragraph): What pain point are we solving, backed by data
- Opportunity (1 paragraph): How big is this if we nail it
- Approach (1-2 paragraphs): High-level solution and success metrics
- Resource ask (1 paragraph): What do we need (headcount, budget, time)
- Risks (1 paragraph): What could go wrong and how we mitigate

One-Pager Example:

Problem: Mid-market customers are churning 15% faster than enterprise customers. Root cause: no contract renewal reminders, no usage-based upsell. We're leaving revenue on the table.

Opportunity: If we improve retention to match enterprise (reducing churn 8 points), that's $2.1M incremental ARR. Implementation cost is 1 engineering quarter.

Approach: Build automated contract renewal notification system + usage-based upsell prompts. Success metrics: churn reduction to 18% (from 23%), expansion revenue increasing 20%. Timeline: 6 weeks to MVP, 3 months to full launch.

Resource Ask: 1 senior engineer, 0.5 designer, product support (me). Estimated 6 weeks.

Risks: Integration with billing system is complex; if delayed, we'd push to Q2. Mitigation: Start with manual process, automate later. We'll de-risk in week 2.

Executive Communication Pattern: BLUF

Always lead with the bottom line. This is how executives think and how they make decisions quickly.

Structure:

Sentence 1: State your recommendation or key finding as a fact, not a question.

Bad: "What if we repositioned our product?"
Good: "I recommend we reposition from 'data analytics for enterprises' to 'real-time dashboards for data teams.'"

Sentence 2-3: Key supporting reason (the strongest reason; if you give two, pick the bigger one).

Bad: "There are several reasons for this. First, we've analyzed the market and found..."
Good: "Reason: data teams are our most engaged segment (4x weekly active users vs. analysts). Repositioning here gives us a $400M TAM where we're defensible."

Rest: Details and reasoning.

Example:

"I recommend we ship our referral feature in Q3 instead of Q4.

Our analytics show new user cohorts with referrals have 35% higher LTV and 40% faster payback period. Early beta feedback has 9/10 NPS. Shipping this month vs. October gives us two full quarters to iterate and optimize.

We'd need to pull one backend engineer from the enterprise onboarding project, which we can absorb without delay.

Next step: I need your go/no-go by Friday to replan resource allocation."

This is exponentially more effective than explaining the situation first, then building to a recommendation.

Minto Pyramid Principle for Strategic Writing

When you have complex thinking to convey, use the pyramid structure:

1. Situation: The context or background everyone agrees on
2. Complication: What changed or created a problem
3. Question: What do we need to figure out (sometimes implied)
4. Key Line: Your main idea or recommendation (the answer to the question)
5. Supporting Ideas: 3-4 key reasons why your key line is right

Example:

Situation: We have three customer segments: startups (30% of base), mid-market (40%), enterprise (30%). Each has different pain points and willingness to pay.

Complication: Our current product roadmap treats all segments the same, leading to feature bloat and slower time-to-value for startups.

Question: Should we build different products for different segments, or maintain one product with better segmentation?

Key Line: We should maintain one product but create three distinct paths through it (segmented onboarding, feature flags, pricing tiers). This gives us segment-specific experience without maintaining three codebases.

Supporting Ideas:
1. Startups need speed; they'll pay less but retain 60% vs. 40% for mid-market
2. Mid-market needs customization; building it into one product is cheaper than maintaining separate SKU
3. Enterprise needs white-label; one codebase with deployment flexibility serves 90% of use cases

Data Presentation in Prose

When embedding data in narrative, follow these rules:

Rule 1: Introduce the number, don't just state it

Before: "We saw a 23% improvement in retention."
After: "Our 30-day retention improved from 28% to 34%, a 23% relative improvement."

Why: The first number (28% to 34%) is absolute improvement; the second (23%) is relative. Both are useful; lead with the absolute, follow with relative.

Rule 2: Give context, not just the number

Before: "We grew 40%."
After: "We grew 40% year-over-year, accelerating from 12% growth in the prior year."

Why: 40% means nothing without context. Is it good? Bad? Accelerating? Decelerating?

Rule 3: Use specific metrics, not vague descriptors

Before: "Engagement improved significantly."
After: "Weekly active users increased 18%, and session duration grew from 8 to 11 minutes (38% improvement)."

Why: "Significantly" is meaningless. Specific metrics are credible and measurable.

Rule 4: Spell out numbers in prose (under 10), use digits for figures (10+)

Before: "5 out of the 15 customers complained."
After: "5 out of 15 customers complained" (since 15 is over 10, use digit for 15; conversely, spell out 5).

Actually, in business writing, it's acceptable to use digits throughout for consistency: "5 out of 15 customers."

Rule 5: Highlight the implications, not just the data

Before: "Our CAC is $50 and LTV is $500."
After: "Our LTV:CAC ratio is 10:1, well above the 3:1 threshold for sustainable unit economics, indicating strong product-market fit."

Why: The implication is what decision-makers care about.

PM-Specific Writing Anti-Patterns

These are common mistakes that weaken PM writing:

Anti-Pattern 1: Vague Stakeholder Language

Before: "We collaborated with stakeholders to align on priorities."
After: "I partnered with the VP of Sales (who was concerned about feature X blocking Q4 contracts) and the Head of Product Marketing (who needed time for launch preparation) to negotiate a four-week delay on feature Y, allowing both to hit their goals."

Why: The first is passive corporate jargon. The second shows actual negotiation and empathy.

Anti-Pattern 2: Responsibility Instead of Ownership

Before: "I was responsible for the roadmap."
After: "I defined the roadmap, made final trade-off calls, and owned execution against it."

Why: "Responsible for" often means "had a title." "Defined and owned" shows agency.

Anti-Pattern 3: Buried Key Metrics

Before: "We shipped the redesign. There were some performance improvements, which we documented in the appendix."
After: "We shipped the redesign, reducing page load time by 38% (from 4.2s to 2.6s). This improvement drove a 12% increase in conversions on the landing page."

Why: Key metrics should never be buried. Lead with impact.

Anti-Pattern 4: Future Tense Instead of Confidence

Before: "We will hopefully improve retention by implementing new features."
After: "We improved retention from 28% to 35% by shipping onboarding redesign and two key features based on user research."

Why: Future tense sounds uncertain. When discussing work you did, use past tense with confidence.

Anti-Pattern 5: Adjectives Without Proof

Before: "We built an innovative, scalable solution."
After: "Our solution handles 10x current traffic without code changes, and the recommendation engine uses novel collaborative filtering that outperforms the prior approach by 18%."

Why: "Innovative" and "scalable" are tell, not show. Specific evidence is credible.

Anti-Pattern 6: Jargon Stacking

Before: "We leveraged AI-driven synergies across the stack to unlock network effects."
After: "We built a recommendation system that suggests relevant users to follow. Early data shows this increases followers per new user by 1.8x (viral coefficient 1.08 to 1.44)."

Why: Jargon stacking sounds impressive but says nothing. Specific details and outcomes are credible.

PM Jargon Audit

Common PM buzzwords to flag and replace:

Readability Scoring Guidance

Tools like Flesch-Kincaid measure readability. Target these benchmarks for PM writing:

Flesch Reading Ease Score:
- 60-70: Ideal for business writing (accessible to college-educated reader in 1 pass)
- 70-80: Easy (high school level, highly accessible)
- 50-60: Standard business writing (some rereading needed)
- 40-50: Difficult (industry jargon, dense concepts, likely too hard)

Simple Tests:
- Average sentence length: Aim for 12-16 words (under 15 is highly readable; over 20 becomes hard to follow)
- Flesch score: Most business writing should be 60+
- Read aloud: If you run out of breath, the sentence is too long

Example Sentence:

Before: "The implementation of our customer success strategy, which necessitated the reorganization of our team structure and the adoption of new tooling to enable more efficient communication patterns, resulted in significant improvements."

Analysis: 34 words, one breath (hard to read)

After: "Our new customer success strategy improved retention. Key changes: we restructured the team, adopted better communication tools, and aligned on metrics. Result: 18% reduction in churn."

Analysis: Shorter sentences, clearer structure, easier to read.

Inclusive Language and Bias-Free Writing

PM writing often goes to diverse audiences. Avoid language that excludes or alienates:

Avoid Gendered Language:
- Before: "Each PM should invest in his career development."
- After: "Each PM should invest in their career development" (or "in career development")

Avoid Ableist Language:
- Before: "This is a blind spot in our strategy."
- After: "This is an overlooked area in our strategy."
- Before: "We need to circle back on this."
- After: "We need to revisit this."

Avoid Culturally Insensitive Language:
- Before: "Let's take a scalp" (sports metaphor with problematic history)
- After: "Let's close this deal."

Avoid Unnecessarily Gendered or Age-Related Language:
- Before: "The young startup scene is very different from legacy companies."
- After: "Startup environments are very different from mature companies."

Avoid Hidden Exclusion:
- Before: "All customers use our mobile app."
- After: "Most customers use our mobile app; some use desktop" (acknowledges the variant)

Before/After Examples by Document Type

Example 1: PRD Before/After

Before:
"New Onboarding Flow

We want to improve the onboarding experience because users are confused. We should simplify the flow and add some helpful guidance. Some users are getting stuck on step 3. We think if we make it easier, more people will complete it and stick around.

Success: More users complete onboarding and stay longer."

After:
"New Onboarding Flow

Problem: Current 8-step onboarding has a 40% dropout rate (steps 3-5). User interviews (n=12) identified unclear field labels and sequential steps feeling repetitive as pain points. Completing onboarding currently takes 12 minutes; competitive benchmark shows 3-minute norm.

Success Metrics:
- Completion rate: 60% to 85%
- Time to first key action: 12 min to 3 min
- Day-7 retention: 28% to 35%

Solution: Reduce to 3 steps (email, password, profile). Reorder based on user feedback. Add auto-fill (geolocation, industry). Progressive disclosure for advanced settings.

Implementation: 4 weeks, 1 engineer, 0.5 designer."

Why it's better: Specific metrics, clear problem definition, success criteria before solution, concrete scope.

Example 2: Email Before/After

Before:
"Hi [Exec],

I wanted to reach out about the strategy for our mid-market segment. We've been analyzing their needs and we've found some interesting patterns. We think there might be an opportunity here. Let me know if you'd like to discuss.

Thanks"

After:
"I recommend we launch a dedicated mid-market offering (tier 2, $500/mo price point) in Q2.

Why: Mid-market is 40% of signups but currently has 6-month churn vs. 24-month for enterprise. Root cause: feature gaps (no audit logs, no SSO). Tier 2 product addresses these gaps without engineering reinvention (feature flags, existing codebase). Projected impact: $3.2M ARR if we capture 20% of TAM.

Timeline: 6 weeks to MVP, 3 months to full launch. Needs approval by Friday to replan Q2 roadmap.

Ready to discuss."

Why it's better: BLUF (recommendation first), specific metrics, clear ask, timeline.

Output Template

EDITING NOTES

Document Type Detected: [PRD / Email / Strategy Doc / Release Notes / One-Pager / Other]
Audience: [Inferred from content: Engineers / Executives / Customers / Board / Other]
Overall Tone Assessment: [Is it appropriate for the audience? One sentence]
Readability Score: [Flesch Reading Ease, if applicable. Target is 60-70 for business writing]

Issues Fixed

Remaining Flags

[Issues that require the author's input to resolve, such as:
- Missing data point: You reference "strong results" in paragraph 2 but don't quantify them
- Unclear ownership: Is Sarah or Marcus responsible for the integration?
- Unresolved trade-off: You mention the approach is "low cost but higher risk" but don't explain the risk or mitigation strategy
- Logic gap: You conclude "this is feasible" but the prior section lists three major blockers
]

Tone and Audience Fit

[Assessment of whether tone is appropriate for the inferred audience. Examples:
- "Tone is too casual for an executive brief; recommend more confident, direct language"
- "Good balance of technical specificity and accessibility for a mixed engineering/product audience"
- "Consider softening language for an external customer audience; currently reads as internal"
]

Key Recommendations

1. [Most important improvement for clarity or credibility]
2. [Second most important]
3. [Third if applicable]

Revised Document

[Full corrected version with all edits applied and tracked]